This screening was far more successful than the one prior. Classmates commented on how lighting had improved as well as pacing and audio. Most issues revolved around narrative problems between the first and second segments. I can improve on this as I plan on reshooting the first half in order to support the second half further.
Most notably, classmates identified both crime-thriller and western genre elements which is a great achievement as I am aiming for a hybrid genre of both crime-thriller and western.
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